Based on the wise critique of my friends at NESCBWI.ning I have made some changes to the post card mailer.
Defining the golden egg, making more room for the sky and on the back moving the child's head closer to her outstretched arm near the crook of her elbow. That also meant that I had to adjust her knees under her to keep her from using the goose as a big pillow if she fell forward.
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very very sweet. i hope it brings everything and every one you hope for!
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